tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5661838379795087062.post6139815285864236720..comments2023-03-25T07:06:13.114-07:00Comments on Amanda Lucier | Outtakes : .Multimedia.Amandahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05208657913051050580noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5661838379795087062.post-81380697627386549322009-11-27T17:02:13.788-08:002009-11-27T17:02:13.788-08:00great pictures. Short and sweet. I would have li...great pictures. Short and sweet. I would have liked some sort of title slide or something that explains exactly what was going on. It takes a little too long (at least for me, maybe I am slow) to figure out exactly what's happening. I guess it was a group of HR veterans going to DC to visit the memorials. A brief explanation while the guy was reading off the names would have fit well and been a nice intro and the pics at the beginning would have made more sense too. <br /><br />I imagine the text explains it all, but the MM needs to stand on its own, b/c honestly, I am not going to make it through the text unless I am really closely connected to this story. Nice work, beautiful images.Stevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04342828997655897408noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5661838379795087062.post-23312276874022697882009-11-25T22:10:06.843-08:002009-11-25T22:10:06.843-08:00um. dang, you might say. That was really nice. I w...um. dang, you might say. That was really nice. I went through it twice and then just scrolled through to look at the photos. Really great coverage and some nice story-telling images. Baller!Tullyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09619870842267892326noreply@blogger.com